Monday, November 21, 2005

return me

Can you hear
the scattered breaths
it is me
suffocating
at my own theft
these spells
far from my helm
besiege me
as a fiegned ally
assumes my life
breathes my thoughts
past
likes
dislikes
words
and mind alike
no release
no valve in sight
you breed
despite my plight
i was misled
to open up
to share
my heart
mind
& soul
if will be by my side
i'd wish you
out of sight
return me

1 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

I promised that I would read your poem. And so I did. I was dazzled by the literal nuances, but I fail to share emotional intensity of the composition. Perhaps, I have never been someone literal. Maybe someday, you can explain to me the feelings, and all that comes with it.

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